Time for Saturday Spanks. Don’t forget to click on the link below this post for more spanking snippets!!
WIP, ‘Her Heart’s Desire‘
Cade Dalton is not in the best of moods. His sprained his wrist and his beautiful wife, Sara is pulling stunts left and right because she knows she can get away from a punishment, but he comes up with an idea that may just work to his advantage. *Snicker* We’ll keep that a secret for now. Instead, I’ll share a few lines with you about why he’s so angry at his naughty wife.
Sara makes the mistake of slipping Cade the pain pills he had warned her not to give him.
“So switching pills was the only way to get me to rest?” He didn’t wait for an answer. “Fretting about me to the point that you do something behind my back is not the kind of marriage we agreed on.”
Sara shifted from one foot to the other. Obviously she was uncomfortable with where this conversation was heading.
“Sara, you knew I was a dominating man when you married me. You were happy with me being the one to take care of the bills and make all of the decisions.” She opened her mouth and he waved his hand in warning. “Please be silent until I am finished.”
Unedited Blurb
Sara Martin longed for two things in life, less responsibility and the boy next door.
Cade Dalton had returned to his hometown looking better than ever, but he was doing the one thing Sara despised, he shared his women with his younger brother, Reese. Sara’s mother had chosen a life of sordid sex with two men, leaving a broken ten year old girl to pick up the pieces of a shattered childhood.
Cade Dalton, successful lawyer and natural Dominant was surprised to see what a beautiful woman Sara had grown up to be. Sara refused his proposal to play threesome so he had given up his lifestyle to be with the woman he loved.
Six months into the marriage Sara’s brother-in-law was beginning to look mighty fine. Sara deeply regretted the chance to be between the two sexy Dalton brothers, but after her violent reaction to Cade’s suggestion she was too ashamed to admit she had changed her mind.
Cade was convinced Sara wanted a life with him and his brother and on the spur of the moment he made a decision, praying it didn’t end their marriage.
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Reading the snippet, I felt a little sorry for Sara. I’m assuming she did think she was helping Cade, and wasn’t trying to pull a fast one. However, he might not see it that way. Then I read your blurb for the story. Wow! This one looks to be taking a turn I hadn’t expected. I look forward to reading more.
That was really an unfair snippet Mary Sue! Too short and I think we deserve the next few sentences (after Kathryn’s read it and ok’d the 8 sentences so you don’t get spanked…). Seriously, I would love to hear him continue. Next week??
LOL, Natasha, I can’t let everything out of the bag. This story will be published in Sept;)
*Applause* I love this! I can so relate to Sara slipping her husband the pain pills he needs but won’t take. Men are so stubborn. Yet, trickery, isn’t appropriate behavior either. So I understand Cade’s ire. Good set-up for spanking. And I like the story premise too. Everything. *More applause.*
Thank you, Cara. You must remember Cade’s hand isn’t up to par so he needs to handle his wife now! I wonder what he’ll come up with? Hmm.
Nothing like the dedicated marital domestic argument to turn up the emotionalism and anticipation of that first spank… very engaging, and agreeing with Natasha –too short… looking forward to more now… ☀
Thanks Joseph, it’s still in the editing stage but I’m getting there:)
I agree with Natasha. Unfair! This snippet makes me want to know more about what’s going to happen. I can’t wait to see. 🙂
LOL, anticipation is the best part:)
Oh WOW! This was so unexpected. I really want to read this. 🙂 I like your blurb and your snippet.
Ooh such an exciting premise!
Thank you, Renee:)
She had good intensions. Hope he cuts her a break.
LOL, Kelli, we’ll have to wait and see;)
Aww, but she wanted him to rest! Good opening to a conflict, I like the blurb too.
Thanks Casey:)
Ooh. I like the sound of this one. Hope we get more next week. Thanks Mary 🙂
Thanks Constance. I suppose I can post a little more;)
I’m onboard for reading more. This is going to one hot and tasty ride.
Cade does come up with a great idea.
I would love to know what he’s come up with!
LOL, Kate. Cade has plans for his little darlin’
I really want to read the continuation to this discussion. That last line gave me chills!
Don’t worry, Maren. Things will warm up in due time;)